5. I specifically changed the way I said things, and I added in a lot more detail. I also Think the way I worded things the second time were better than how I said it the first.

6. I think the peer review and shearing my essay with an adult helped me improve my writing the best for many reasons. First of all, it gave me feed back of what others think of what I wrote. They can help me make a sentence more clear if I need to and also they can check for spelling or grammar mistakes. I liked having a parent read my essay because then I get an older persons perspective on what I wrote and they may catch mistakes better than students can.

7. I think what will help me improve my writing this year is having a few different people read my writing because then I can see what multiple people think of it. Also, if people make notes on it, then I can remember them for the next paper I write to try to make it better than the one before.

8. There are many things that I can do to make me a netter writer but I think something I need to work on the most is not adding too much information in my paper. Adding information is obviously good but sometimes if you add too much then it will cause you to have run on sentences and you may forget to add in the things that are required to be in the paper.